quick writing tip

brimorganbooks:

put the most important information at the end of the sentence! consider:

I confessed my love for him at the end of the semester.

not bad, right? but it could be so much better! try this instead:

At the end of the semester, I confessed my love for him.

oh, the drama! don’t you want to know more? try this in your current WIP—you’ll be surprised what a difference it makes!